Inkpads Application
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Post by Inkpads Application on Jun 17, 2010 10:54:08 GMT -5
About your Character- (You MUST fill this out.) Character's Name; Age; 3 Gender; Female DOB: April 4th Height; 3ft Weight; 150 lbs Species; Jaguar (Black Panther) Requested Rank; Royal Calvary Physical Description of Character; she was 3ft tall, and no visible spots. She was 150 pounds, and muscular. Her eyes were a dazzling yellow. Do you have any visuals? If so, share them! Give an example of a Roleplay post! Inkpad swept across the land in a fast run, but slowed down and crouched in the grass. She stared at the rabbit through the darkness, and hoped that the creature wouldn't spot her glowing eyes. She slowly spiraled around it, getting closer and closer, when, she finally pounced. At the last second it ran away, and she chased after it but did not succeed in catching it. Anything else you'd like to add?
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Post by Platinum on Jun 17, 2010 11:02:36 GMT -5
Okay few problems- You forgot to fill out the name of your character, age, gender, and DOB. I'll let that go since I spoke to you In-Game. Everything else is great except for the the black panther part- Panthers are not their own species. They are just black jaguars or leopards, even cougars. I'll change this for you. but it's an FYI. Other then that and a bit of RP coaching, I'm ok with this. Accepted [/color]
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Post by Inkpad on Jun 17, 2010 11:04:19 GMT -5
Sorry, I forgot this:
(You MUST fill this out.) Character's Name; Inkpad Age; 3 Gender; Female DOB: April 4th, 2007
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